What are Angels?

Clumsy grace
First toddler steps
Humans
Trundling along
So sweet
The angels wept

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One thought on “What are Angels?

  1. Alan J. Blaustein

    Delightful imagery! The poem scans, dimeter, trimeter and monometer: First Toddler steps, //-/; Clumsy grace, /-/; Humans, /-. Can you read this in the remaining lines? I can scan the rest if you like.

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